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The Great Revision

Sat May 3, 2008, 5:23 AM
  • Listening to: Krypteria
  • Reading: Harry Potter
  • Watching: Firefly
  • Playing: Devil May Cry 4
  • Eating: Breakfast
  • Drinking: Apple Juice!!
Yep. I kinda revised Final Essence a bit, touched it up, entirely rewrote some chapters, so that's why I resubmitted all thirteen XD...here's the changes:

Caution: Possible Spoilers
Prologue: Time changed again, this time to 4283 AD or 267 AW.
Chapter 1: Added information about Draconis’ hair style.
Chapter 2: Changed Mikari’s accent from French to Romanian. It’s just more elegant, and I had to use one somewhere XD…he doesn’t speak French. Also changed the death of Azamachi. Oh, and Drac no longer smokes. That was stupid. He just does it to escape the Clenzi.
Chapter 3: Fixed up Draconis’ killing of the Clenzi Don. Also, removed the fight against the Heretic Hunters. It just didn’t flow right.
Chapter 4: Supremacy Wars lasted for 43 years, not 12. Also, the name of the Zealist God is no longer “The Emperor”. Now called “Imperator”. Which is just Latin for Emperor. But whatever. Added details about the Veil and the Underdark.
Chapter 5: Removed the Heretic Hunters entirely.
Chapter 6: Changed the word “Emperor” to “Imperator” a thousand times. Fixed an error depicting Zertamus as High Inquisitor, when in fact, he’s dead. lolz.
Chapter 7: Nothing. Haha.
Chapter 8: Entirely rewrote it. Read it.
Chapter 9: Nothing again.
Chapter 10: Like 8, it’s entirely rewritten.
Chapter 11: No changes, again. Mwahaha.
Chapter 12: Rewritten completely, seeing how all the information in that one I gave away in chapter 10. O.o

Yep. Have fun, thanks for reading.

~Draconis~

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  • Current Residence: Your local Dracula-esque castle of doom
  • Interests: see "All About Drac" journal entry
  • Favourite movie: The Matrix Saga, Pirates, Princess Bride, Serenity, Pitch Black/Chronicles of Riddick
  • Favourite band or musician: System of a Down, Evanescence, A7X, various metal/gothic metal bands
  • Favourite genre of music: Metal, Gothic Rock, Alternative, Rock, Punk, Random Shit
  • Favourite artist: M.C. Escher
  • Favourite poet or writer: Douglas Adams, J.R.R. Tolkien
  • MP3 player of choice: Ipod Mini ownz y0ur 50ul
  • Shell of choice: Red Koopa Shells...
  • Wallpaper of choice: Mine!
  • Skin of choice: I ain't no racist
  • Favourite game: Any Metroid game, Halo 2, Super Mario World, Chrono Trigger
  • Favourite gaming platform: SNES...easily.
  • Favourite cartoon character: Most of the Invader Zim cast, Patrick, Asuka, Kenshin, Vegeta
  • Personal Quote: I'm not mean. I'm brutally honest.
  • Tools of the Trade: Trench coat, katana, techno. I'm set...

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:iconmortamas-kyougu:
how goes it drac?

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They don't have any wieghts out here so they have to come up with creative ways of torture
:icon7he13thprodigy:
It goes well...I am very tired though XD

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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
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"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD
:iconmortamas-kyougu:
then sleep

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They don't have any wieghts out here so they have to come up with creative ways of torture
:iconi-am-blindfolded:
Bwahaha! I am your 4000th pageview!

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"But if your hand touches metal, I swear by my pretty floral bonnet, I will end you."
~Malcolm Reynolds
:iconcagin-vairu-akashira:
Aparently it's over four thousand then.

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Being insane is part of what being Saecrean is all about, ain't it? - Cirrgeth Makino
Education is the ability to listen to almost anything without losing your temper.
--Robert Frost
:iconi-am-blindfolded:
Yes. Yes it is.

. . .Yup.

. . .

. . .yep.

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"But if your hand touches metal, I swear by my pretty floral bonnet, I will end you."
~Malcolm Reynolds
:iconblackroseinthefire:
*pops up out of nowhere*

HI DRAC! OMFG AM I HYPER!!! weeeeee *runs in random, indistinguishable shapes* so im just in advisory (bored) and i gotsta wait till 9:30 to go sell bagels for the literary magazine and crap and i am like "OMG WHAT AM I GOING TO DO TO KILL TIME??? why, harass my friends over dA, of course. So i've been leaving people nice happy comments for when they go on, causing them to waste precious minutes of their lives reading my long and pointless comments but whatever...HUGS FOR ALL!!! :hug:

k...bagel sale right about now...ttyl!!!

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"But Lancelot mused a little space
He said, 'She has a lovely face;
God in his mercy lend her grace,
The Lady of Shalott.'"

~Alfred Lord Tennyson :blackrose:
:icongood-twin-bob:
HAVE YOU SEEN GATOBOB-SPOTTY'S NEW WEBCAM!?!?!?1111!!!?? :D

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8D
:icon7he13thprodigy:
LOL :lmao: THAT'S HILARIOUS....

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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
Xbox Live Gamertag: Kenjishiya

"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD
:icon7he13thprodigy:
No...judging by your reaction, I should go check it out. Man, they really should tell you when someone comments here...

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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
Xbox Live Gamertag: Kenjishiya

"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD

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