Caution: Possible Spoilers
Prologue: Time changed again, this time to 4283 AD or 267 AW.
Chapter 1: Added information about Draconis hair style.
Chapter 2: Changed Mikaris accent from French to Romanian. Its just more elegant, and I had to use one somewhere XD he doesnt speak French. Also changed the death of Azamachi. Oh, and Drac no longer smokes. That was stupid. He just does it to escape the Clenzi.
Chapter 3: Fixed up Draconis killing of the Clenzi Don. Also, removed the fight against the Heretic Hunters. It just didnt flow right.
Chapter 4: Supremacy Wars lasted for 43 years, not 12. Also, the name of the Zealist God is no longer The Emperor. Now called Imperator. Which is just Latin for Emperor. But whatever. Added details about the Veil and the Underdark.
Chapter 5: Removed the Heretic Hunters entirely.
Chapter 6: Changed the word Emperor to Imperator a thousand times. Fixed an error depicting Zertamus as High Inquisitor, when in fact, hes dead. lolz.
Chapter 7: Nothing. Haha.
Chapter 8: Entirely rewrote it. Read it.
Chapter 9: Nothing again.
Chapter 10: Like 8, its entirely rewritten.
Chapter 11: No changes, again. Mwahaha.
Chapter 12: Rewritten completely, seeing how all the information in that one I gave away in chapter 10. O.o
Yep. Have fun, thanks for reading.
~Draconis~






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They don't have any wieghts out here so they have to come up with creative ways of torture
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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
Xbox Live Gamertag: Kenjishiya
"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD
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They don't have any wieghts out here so they have to come up with creative ways of torture
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"But if your hand touches metal, I swear by my pretty floral bonnet, I will end you."
~Malcolm Reynolds
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Being insane is part of what being Saecrean is all about, ain't it? - Cirrgeth Makino
Education is the ability to listen to almost anything without losing your temper.
--Robert Frost
. . .Yup.
. . .
. . .yep.
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"But if your hand touches metal, I swear by my pretty floral bonnet, I will end you."
~Malcolm Reynolds
HI DRAC! OMFG AM I HYPER!!! weeeeee *runs in random, indistinguishable shapes* so im just in advisory (bored) and i gotsta wait till 9:30 to go sell bagels for the literary magazine and crap and i am like "OMG WHAT AM I GOING TO DO TO KILL TIME??? why, harass my friends over dA, of course. So i've been leaving people nice happy comments for when they go on, causing them to waste precious minutes of their lives reading my long and pointless comments but whatever...HUGS FOR ALL!!!
k...bagel sale right about now...ttyl!!!
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"But Lancelot mused a little space
He said, 'She has a lovely face;
God in his mercy lend her grace,
The Lady of Shalott.'"
~Alfred Lord Tennyson
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8D
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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
Xbox Live Gamertag: Kenjishiya
"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD
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~Draconis Kenjishiya, the 13th Prodigy~
E-mail: drackenjishiya@hotmail.com
AIM: The13thProdigy
Xbox Live Gamertag: Kenjishiya
"And so, I do bequeath...a BOOT TO THE HEAD." -Youtube videos XD
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